第1个回答 2011-11-08
1.超长版：（将来时）
l am old, and has never been to mother birthday.
My mom can be tough. The unit far from home, she went to work every day before dawn, go home after dark, for my cooking, laundry, counseling, homework, and check ... ... has been busy working to go to bed very late. My mother loved me, when I fell ill, she is very anxious to take me to hospital; I passed the ten-year-old birthday, my mother gave me time to buy a birthday cake, carefully prepared a birthday present , while on her own birthday, but never mentioned. Mom's birthday this year is to catch up on Saturday, I want to give her a surprise, to repay my mother for my deep love.
Mom's birthday, her unit went very early to work overtime. Mom had left I got up, finished work will be busy for them. I know my mother loves a clean, polished table, so I first spotless, sweeping straight up the ground again twice, to clean the room was clean, neatly placed after the items and took out my pocket money this month money went to buy a bouquet of flowers near the store's pink carnation and a very beautiful card. I put flowers in a vase gracefully, will write a "Happy Birthday Mom!" Card on the vase next to the all ready and waiting for the mother to go home.
Around 12 noon, my mother finally returned, she opened the door side, while calling my name. I am out of the kitchen, hands, carrying a bowl of steaming noodles in soup, respectfully before it ended to her mother, excitedly said: "Today is your birthday, I try to do the longevity noodles, you quickly try delicious? "Mom smiled, looked at the flowers and cards on the table and gently stroked my head, very pleased and said:" My child, you really grow up, and wiser. "Then, she quickly took bowl of my hands, sitting at the table, gusto to eat, even that tasty. I was flattered, has looked at the mother eat the noodles, while quietly said to himself: "Every your next birthday, I have to do to you long life noodles, I wish you health and longevity. Mom, I love you!"
2.正常版
today is my mother's birthday .I want to give some suiprise to her ,so I think about how I can do? After sometime I think my mother does the housework veryday ,and she is so tired .But I didn't .So I plan to help my mother do the housework.After working,she goes home.She found something clean and was happy.Until dinner .Mother asked me if I did the housework or not ? I said nothing ,but my mother smiled.本回答被提问者采纳
l am old, and has never been to mother birthday.
My mom can be tough. The unit far from home, she went to work every day before dawn, go home after dark, for my cooking, laundry, counseling, homework, and check ... ... has been busy working to go to bed very late. My mother loved me, when I fell ill, she is very anxious to take me to hospital; I passed the ten-year-old birthday, my mother gave me time to buy a birthday cake, carefully prepared a birthday present , while on her own birthday, but never mentioned. Mom's birthday this year is to catch up on Saturday, I want to give her a surprise, to repay my mother for my deep love.
Mom's birthday, her unit went very early to work overtime. Mom had left I got up, finished work will be busy for them. I know my mother loves a clean, polished table, so I first spotless, sweeping straight up the ground again twice, to clean the room was clean, neatly placed after the items and took out my pocket money this month money went to buy a bouquet of flowers near the store's pink carnation and a very beautiful card. I put flowers in a vase gracefully, will write a "Happy Birthday Mom!" Card on the vase next to the all ready and waiting for the mother to go home.
Around 12 noon, my mother finally returned, she opened the door side, while calling my name. I am out of the kitchen, hands, carrying a bowl of steaming noodles in soup, respectfully before it ended to her mother, excitedly said: "Today is your birthday, I try to do the longevity noodles, you quickly try delicious? "Mom smiled, looked at the flowers and cards on the table and gently stroked my head, very pleased and said:" My child, you really grow up, and wiser. "Then, she quickly took bowl of my hands, sitting at the table, gusto to eat, even that tasty. I was flattered, has looked at the mother eat the noodles, while quietly said to himself: "Every your next birthday, I have to do to you long life noodles, I wish you health and longevity. Mom, I love you!"
2.正常版
today is my mother's birthday .I want to give some suiprise to her ,so I think about how I can do? After sometime I think my mother does the housework veryday ,and she is so tired .But I didn't .So I plan to help my mother do the housework.After working,she goes home.She found something clean and was happy.Until dinner .Mother asked me if I did the housework or not ? I said nothing ,but my mother smiled.本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2011-11-06
1. I will help my mother do some house work .(do some washing , cook dinner ,do some cleaning and so on .)
2. I will go to a movie with my mother .
3. I will say "Happy Birthday " and "I Love You " to my mother .
2. I will go to a movie with my mother .
3. I will say "Happy Birthday " and "I Love You " to my mother .
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