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帮我检查一下又没有错误~~谢谢阿！！！！！

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have family meals together, we have a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner, I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes, firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped, Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.
今天是春节。我度过了开心的一天。晚上，我们全家人一起吃饭，大家都互相祝福。吃完饭后，我收看了春节联欢晚会，我非常喜欢。到了11点钟，鞭炮声陆续响起了，北京呈现出热闹的景象，我更加热爱祖国了。最令人难忘的就是我亲手包饺子的过程了，这并不是我的第一次尝试，所以还算顺利，我小心翼翼的包着，那顿饺子，我似乎也吃得格外香！
春节就这样过去了，但是这一天，是我假期中最快乐的一天，我爱春节

Answer 1

你还是拿汉语来我给你翻译好了!~

汉语意思不连贯,行文没有逻辑,但我还是忠实你的原文翻译下来了:

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. First, we had family meals together tonight and we blessed each other. After dinner, We watched the Spring Festival Gala. I really loved that. At 11:00 , firecrackers sported. Then the excting scenes had turned on in Beijing. I really love our motherland. What is unforgettable is that I made dumplings myself.This is not my first attempt,so it is fluent. I really enjoyed the dumplings.
The Spring Festival had past, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.I love the Spring Festival.

Answer 2

有啊
is 应该用was吧 因为这好象是日记,已经过去了
晕,请先该一下再拿出来,没法说,太多了,应该用过去式(动词)
如have.....

Answer 3

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we have(had) a family meals(去掉s) together, we have(made) a lot of blessings. Eaten after dinner(Ater eating the dinner), I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes,(?句意不明) firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love the(my) motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is(was) not my first attempt,(连词?) we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped(wrapped carefully), Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later(??????), but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.

Answer 4

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent(HAD) a happy day. Tonight we have(had) family meals together, we have a lot of blessing (We blessed a lot). Eaten(删除) after dinner, I watched the Spring Festival Gala(evening), I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes(From 11:00), firecrackers sports(blest), the excitement, showing a picture, I love the motherland.(你这句话想说什么意思？） I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this is not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very wrapped carefully , Snaddon dumplings, I ate very fragrant! Spring Festival came this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.

不如你说说看你大致想说什么，错误蛮多的。

Answer 5

Today is the Spring Festival. I spent a happy day. Tonight we had a family meal together, we made a lot of blessings.Ater eating the dinner,I watched the Spring Festival Gala, I really loved that. To 11:00 minutes. firecrackers sports, the excitement, showing a picture, I love my motherland. I personally was most impressive in the process of the dumplings, this was not my first attempt, we went off smoothly. I very carefully wrapped carefully, Snaddon dumplings, I seem to eat very fragrant! Spring Festival on this later, but this day is the happiest day of my holiday.

Answer 6

今天是春节。我度过了快乐的一天。今晚我家济济一堂吃年夜饭，我们互道祝福。饭后，我看了非常喜欢的春晚。11:00的时候，一片由鞭炮、欣喜组成的景象，我爱祖国。我个人对做饺子的过程印象十分深刻，这并不是我第一次的尝试，我们很平稳的完成了。我小心的包起、Snaddon（单词没见过...人名？）饺子，我觉得吃起来特别香！随后就是春节，但这一天是我假期里最快乐的。

注：这写的什么玩意儿...