谁帮我写一篇英语作文‘我喜欢的一个体育明星’

Question

要求150词左右要自己写的 不要到网上翻译 有一点病句没事写得好的有加分

Answer 1

我是一个初二的学生，也许写了会有些错误，我会尽力的！My favorite sport starI like doing sports.Like running and playing badminton.My favorite sports star is Liu Xiang.He is tall and thin.I think he is strong!He can run fast.He was born on July.13th.He was born in Shanghai.He is a runner.Liu Xiang was got many good grades in 2004 .But in last years,His foot was feel hurt.So he did't join Olympic games!Many people was sad.But now he is feeling well.He can join lots of contests.I like him best.Because he is very hard!I'm pround of him!i love him forever! 写完了，如果你觉得这篇不好，我在网上找了一篇Born in the 1980s, Liu Xiang is one of the best athletes in our country. He is good at running and 110 meters hurdles. He is even the most capable hurdler in the world. He keeps the best record of 12.88 seconds until now. No one has the ability to break it so far. Among lots of TV programmes, I like the sport games best. And the 110 hurdles races are the most exciting games in them. Everytime I see Liu Xiang running in the track, shouting wildly after the races, I find myself is full of passion in my heart. Especially, the moment when he gets the first prize on the stage,I can't help applauding for his excellent performance. I am deeply moved by his spirit and his great ambitions. The sports spirit of Liu Xiang also inspires me a lot in my life and study. As a young man, Liu Xiang is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so many records, though he has got many medals now.I think this spirit is worth to learned by all of us. With this ambition, we could defeat any difficulties in our lives and works. Affected by his restless soul, I will never give up and insist my ideals. As one of his fans, I hope that Liu Xiang could do well in the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, and win more gold medals for our country. I support him forever in my heart. As for myself, I will work as hard as him to make more progress in my study. 如果你自己想写的话，我找到了一个思路，可以给你参考参考1.Wen and where was he born?
2.What is his job?
3.What did he do in 2004?
4.Why is he famous today?Why do you like him？

Answer 2

Deng Yaping is my favorite sports star.She was a great Chinese ping pong ball athlete. Deng Yaping was born on the second of June,1973.She is thirty-five years old now.With the effection from her father,she started playing table tennis when she was only five!Because she was shorter than most of the athletes,the Henan table tennis team didn't let her join until 1983.She was the most talented and outstanding athlete at that time.After she had joined the Henan table tennis team,she was chosen by the national table tennis team!Of course,she had to practice harder and harder than before.In 1997,she went to Tsinghua University and majoyed in English and management.She had hardly time during the majoying but she tried her best and finally graduated successfully.From 1993 to 1998,she became the number one women's singles player in the ITTF(International Table Tennis Federation).Now she is also a kind and loving mother.Deng Yaping is always full of energy and confidence.She doesn't satisfy the medals that she got.She works hard for her destinations bravely."Never give up"That's her motto,so do I.That's why I admire her so much and I dream to be a great person just like her.
Thank you !

自己写的哟！想很久了！