英语作文，修改语病

Question

letter from a woman who was courageous. John Branford thanked her and wrote her a letter. For a long time, John Branford met her at the station and passed her test. He knew the woman named Hollis Menel who met with Apple as a signal until John Branford. Germany must leave. In another place, John Branford had his own work. In the friend's introduction, he contacted Ms. Roma and found out during her association with Roma. Roma was the one who always encouraged herself. Hollis Menel, who gave his courage and hope.

我是用翻译软件翻译的，求大神修改一下语病和不当的单词 ，谢谢
When John Branford was a soldier, he often received a letter from a woman who was courageous. John Branford thanked her and wrote her a letter. For a long time, John Branford met her at the station and passed her test. He knew the woman named Hollis Menel who met with Apple as a signal until John Branford. Germany must leave. In another place, John Branford had his own work. In the friend's introduction, he contacted Ms. Roma and found out during her association with Roma. Roma was the one who always encouraged herself. Hollis Menel, who gave his courage and hope

Answer 1

软件翻译的整体不连贯，所以不知所云。你需要把中文原文发出来，这样才能你所要表达的连贯的意思，才能帮你修改。

追问

约翰·布兰福德当兵时，经常收到一位女士的信，信里传递着勇气和希望，约翰·布兰福德很感谢她，一直给她回信。时间久了，约翰·布兰福德在车站和她见面，通过了霍利斯·梅内尔的考验，认识了她。他们用苹果代替打招呼。之后约翰·布兰福德必须离开。在另一个地方的约翰·布兰福德有了自己的工作，在朋友的介绍下和一名叫罗玛的女士认识，在与罗玛交谈的过程中发现了，罗玛就是一直传递勇气和希望的霍利斯·梅内尔。

追答

When John Branford was a soldier, he often received letters from a lady. The letters gave him courage and hope, so he was very grateful for her and wrote back to her. For a long time, John Branford met her at the station and passed her test. He knew her by the name Hollis Menel. They met each other through Apple instead of in person. Then John Branford had to leave. Then he had his own job in another place, and he got acquainted by his friends with a lady named Roma. Through his conversation with Roma, he found that Roma was Hollis Menel, the lady who had always been giving courage and hope to him.