第1个回答 2019-07-04
My
birthday
party.
Today
is
my
(你几岁就写几岁,这里用序数词)birthday.
I
have
a
birthday
party
with
my
family.
My
mom
and
dad
give
me
a
beautiful
gift,and
my
grandmom
cooks
a
delicious
meal
for
me.I
love
the
cake
and
the
food
very
much.I
feel
very
happy
with
my
family
and
it
is
a
good
memory
for
me.
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我的生日聚会
今天是我第(。。。)个生日。我和我的家人办了一个生日聚会。我的妈妈和爸爸送我了一格漂亮的礼物,我的奶奶做了一顿很美味的饭。我非常喜欢蛋糕和饭菜。我和我的家人在一起感到很快乐,并且这给我留下了美好的回忆。
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恩,我觉得或许你用过去式比较好,你看看吧