首先想好一个框架：我的生日派对怎么样，然后发生了什么，最后你的感想
第一篇
Yesterday was My 15years birthday. My parents had a birthday party at home. I invited my friends to come to the party. At the party. They gave me many small presents. Such as cards, picture books, pens and so on. They sang Happy Birthday to me. My mother made a big cake for me. I cutted the cake into small pieces and gave them out. we sang and danced. We had a good time at the party.
昨天是我15岁生日。我父母在家里举行了一个生日聚会。我邀请了我的朋友来参加聚会。在聚会上。他们给了我许多小礼物。比如卡片、图画书、钢笔等等。他们给我唱生日快乐歌。我妈妈给我做了一个大蛋糕。我把蛋糕切成小块，然后分发出去。我们又唱又跳。我们在晚会上玩得很开心。
第二篇
It's July23. Today I am16 years old. I am goibg to have a party at home and I am waiting for all my friends to come. They are going to bring?lots of beautiful presents with them.
My parents are preparing a lot of nice things to eat and drink. At the party we are going to play games, sing songs, dance and listen to music. I think we will have a good time.
今天是7月23日。今天我16岁了。我要在家里举行一个聚会，我在等我所有的朋友来。他们会带来什么？他们带了很多漂亮的礼物。我父母正在准备很多好吃的东西来吃和喝。在晚会上，我们将玩游戏、唱歌、跳舞和听音乐。我想我们会玩得很开心。
第三篇
Yesterday is my Six. year old birthday. it is important to me as I can go to primary school after my birthday, It means that I grow up. Igot up very early at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a litl down. But Irecovered with excited s00n and then I went out to play. Everything in my eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o'clock, my mother gave me a surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present. I'm so happy that day.
昨天是我的第六天。岁生日。这对我来说很重要，因为我可以在生日后去上小学，这意味着我长大了。那天我起得很早。我妈妈只是对我笑了笑，什么也没说。我感到有点失落。但我带着兴奋的心情回来了，然后我出去玩了。我眼中的一切都是如此美丽。当我五点钟左右回到家时，妈妈给了我一个惊喜。她为我准备了一个聚会，并邀请了我所有的朋友。她还送给我一个可爱的书包作为生日礼物。那天我很高兴。
In my last birthday party.I had fun with my frends.I had a birthday party on that day. I got up early and cleaned the room. After breakfast my good friends all came. We sang songs and played games together. We ate birthday cake and cooked delious food. They gave me lots of beautiful presents, such as toy bear, notebooks, fresh flowers and so on. We went to the park and went boating in the afternoon. We really had a good time.本回答被网友采纳
