本人近期要参加一项外资企业工厂的面试,要用英语自我介绍一下,所以在此麻烦各位帮帮忙帮我翻译一下……

本人近期要参加一项外资企业工厂的面试,要用英语自我介绍一下,所以在此麻烦各位帮帮忙帮我翻译一下……谢谢!
内容如下:
我叫~,来自西北甘肃,今年23岁,我是技校毕业,曾在校被评为优秀党员,我喜欢交友,看书,在毕业以后做过销售,卖衣服,我喜欢挑战,也有上进心,很希望能与贵公司合作,我会以我所学好好努力!谢谢!
所有不足之处,请帮忙修改一下吧!多谢了!

My name is ..., from the northwest Gansu Province, 23 years old, I was technical school graduate, has been named an outstanding member in the school, I like making friends, reading, after graduation worked in sales, selling clothes, I like the challenge, there are self-motivated, it hopes to cooperate with your company, I will work hard, I've learned! Thank you!追问

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