(如果早上面试最好先说一句good morning!看情况定。下午good afternoon!表示礼貌。)I really appreciate that your honorable company for offering me such great opportunity to have this interview.
My name is XXX, and just graduated from XXX University this year.(个人觉得把学校名称加进去比较好。) General mechandise is my interest. I am a optimistic and easy-going person(你要是女的就把person替换成girl,男替换成boy。), and I can endure hardships and am capable of hard work. During my campus life I served as minister of Social Affairs Department making plans for three large evening parties. The internship of being a superviser in Golden Dragon Fish Company(金龙鱼公司是个专有名词,你最好上官方网站查一下具体的名字,我查了半天没找到。如果你也没找到就凑合着用这个吧,如果是中国人听你这个介绍他们听得懂的。) gave me some experiences of promotion. I will adapt to my job quickly if you can give the chance. Thank you!
中间加了很多备注,另外我觉得你这段自我介绍内容的顺序应该做点调整,使得逻辑更紧密。我把完整的你要的翻译重新罗列给你:
Good morning!I really appreciate that your honorable company for offering me such great opportunity to have this interview.
My name is XXX, and just graduated from XXX University this year. During my campus life I served as minister of Social Affairs Department making plans for three large evening parties. Moreover,the internship of being a superviser in Golden Dragon Fish Company gave me some experiences of promotion. General mechandise is always my interest. I believe I am qualified for the job because I am a optimistic and easy-going girl, and I can endure hardships and am capable of hard work. I can adapt to any job quickly. I will not let you down if you can give the chance.Thank you!
我翻译成中文你看看:早上好!我很感谢贵公司能给我这个面试的机会。我的名字是XXX,今年刚毕业于XXX学校。在校期间我曾经担任社会部部长一职,并策划了三场大型晚会。在实习期间,我在金龙鱼公司做督导,这个实习经验给了我一些促销方面的经验。百货这方面的工作一直是我的兴趣所在。我相信我能胜任这份工作,因为我是一个性该开朗,随和并且能够吃苦耐劳的人。我可以以最快的速度适应岗位。如果贵公司给我这个机会,我不会让你们失望。谢谢!
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